Sunday, August 08, 2010

Third

Armaity Dilliwala looked incredulously at her report card again. No, there was no mistaking it. There it was.

Third.

She felt a little sick. In all the ten years of her life that she could remember, she had always come first. That is what she was known for. Her parents, their friends, relatives - they all joked about it. One joke in particular, her Uncle Jamshed liked to tell and retell - his wife Sherzeen and Armaity's mother Aloo had both had their due dates around the same time but a week before the due date, Aloo went into labor and after a relatively easy five hours, there she was - Armaity, always ahead of her peers.

And now this. She could feel the eyes of her classmates on her. She thought she heard some whispering and giggling. She was still standing in the same spot where she had opened the card and seen that ugly thing stamped across the bottom right corner.

She had no friends, at least none that would sympathize with her at this hour of need. She had always consoled herself thinking it was because all her classmates were jealous of her. Now surely, they would all be laughing at her.

Dazed, she made her way back to her car and still unbelieving she handed over the report to her mother after reaching home. She was expecting her parents to break into hysterics and drama, as was their wont. But her mother just said - Good child, well done. Chalo ni, Rustom Uncle nu iyahan jaavnu chhe.

Armaity was stunned. What was the biggest disaster in her life was being treated like ant-shit by her mother. She was relieved at one level but also slightly disappointed at another. Wasn't that the only thing which made her what she was - loved and special?

By the end of the week, she realized otherwise. Nothing around her changed. Her parents continued to behave the same way as before. They fussed about her, took her to her tuitions and scolded her annoying younger brother for raising hell with his toy guns while she did her daily home-work. Her classmates continued to come to her with sums they could not solve, and the teachers continued to leave her in-charge of the class during free-periods.

By the end of this life-changing week, she was grappling with a peculiar thought. Maybe, just maybe, there was more to her than her rank.

8 comments:

Kavity said...

What is with all these beautiful posts - First, Second, Third? Is there some theme thing happening without the readers' knowledge??

By the way, the series is great :)

Yogesh said...

Yup, loving the series :)

The Soul of Alec Smart said...

Awesome! Loved this Shreya. Is there more?

Shreya said...

Thanks guys :) I think there will be more.

Madhurjya (Banjo) Banerjee said...

Really!!!! Her parents were OK with coming 3rd?

Priya said...

very well written...i see a glimpse of u in the girl :)
n where did u learn the gujrati from?? :P

Shreya said...

@Banjo - Yes, not all parents are Bong :D
@Priya - I know Gujarati, at least in theory :D

Deepa and Srinath said...

Looking forward to the serial novel even more now :)

At slightly uncomfortable places, all ur writings ring true :) And that is beautiful :)