It has been long
Since I wrote a song
A streak of love sublime
On the vast canvas of time
When it entered my life
I was fraught with strife
Watching myself with a wary eye
Wrestling with demons of years gone by
But it was insistent and patient
It came at a good time too - perfectly stationed
I forgot to look back
Under its persevering attack
A year, two - under the sun
Enough for me to know it was the one
So I bound it to me more tight than anything
And now I wear it on my hand in the shape of a ring
It's so brilliantly beautiful!
ReplyDeleteCopyright the poem please, lest someone tries looting it!
beautiful...
ReplyDeletelight yet emotionally loaded :-)
couldnt resist commenting :)
ReplyDeleteToo good...
and do heed to Kavity's suggestion... I'm too tempted to plagiarize :)
I can so imagine Britney singing it :)
ReplyDeleteHmm.. It's a stealable (is there such a word?) song, alrite!
ReplyDeleteToo good :)
Hey thanks guys :)
ReplyDelete@Kavity - ia there such a thing as copyrighting your blog?
@Banjo - Britney? Why not Lady Gaga ;)
Yes. Use this.
ReplyDeletehttp://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/2.5/in/
kya bolu...always been ur fan..u rock
ReplyDeleteThanks Kavity.
ReplyDeleteShilpa - where are you???
Awww.. this is simply beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteCongratulations again! :)
Congratulations for the ring around the finger!
ReplyDeleteSaw the pics on Facebook. Good going.
Where are you? No writing no more? I am really hoping you'd come up with the next part of the First, Second, Third.. series. That was damn good :)
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