Saturday, October 16, 2010

Long due and completely true

It has been long
Since I wrote a song
A streak of love sublime
On the vast canvas of time

When it entered my life
I was fraught with strife
Watching myself with a wary eye
Wrestling with demons of years gone by

But it was insistent and patient
It came at a good time too - perfectly stationed
I forgot to look back
Under its persevering attack

A year, two - under the sun
Enough for me to know it was the one
So I bound it to me more tight than anything
And now I wear it on my hand in the shape of  a ring

12 comments:

  1. It's so brilliantly beautiful!
    Copyright the poem please, lest someone tries looting it!

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  2. beautiful...
    light yet emotionally loaded :-)

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  3. couldnt resist commenting :)
    Too good...

    and do heed to Kavity's suggestion... I'm too tempted to plagiarize :)

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  4. I can so imagine Britney singing it :)

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  5. Hmm.. It's a stealable (is there such a word?) song, alrite!

    Too good :)

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  6. Hey thanks guys :)
    @Kavity - ia there such a thing as copyrighting your blog?
    @Banjo - Britney? Why not Lady Gaga ;)

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  7. Yes. Use this.

    http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/2.5/in/

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  8. kya bolu...always been ur fan..u rock

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  9. Thanks Kavity.
    Shilpa - where are you???

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  10. Awww.. this is simply beautiful :)

    Congratulations again! :)

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  11. Congratulations for the ring around the finger!

    Saw the pics on Facebook. Good going.

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  12. Where are you? No writing no more? I am really hoping you'd come up with the next part of the First, Second, Third.. series. That was damn good :)

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